January 26, 2010
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Reflections of Truth
Mirror why do you frustrate me so
Showing every detail
Screaming too the world
Every fault that prevailsI have tried to creep by
Not to make a sound
Your hearing must be stupendous
You capture every detail and expoundEven in complete darkness
I wonder what you reflect
My mind tells me
You have recorded every detail without neglectI would like to break you and toss you
But can’t stand the thought
Seven years of bad luck
Just because we foughtYour perfection kills me
Reflecting only what you see
I have now realized the truth
I need to accept me, I need to accept me © 2010
Comments (6)
Yeah! The sad truth of it all… if you can’t overcome them, you have to be with them.
You’re compliments are very touching. Thank you
Cool poem! I’m guessing it’s about your girlfriend? i’m not quite sure
@chr1st1an - Actually it about me and the mirror … I sometime don’t like what I see … so I have to accept me as who I am.
@ZSA_MD - Thanks for stopping by and the mirror always tells the truth unfortunately.
“screaming to the world”
I enjoy it, I wanted for the ending something regarding how the mirrors reflection is an empty photograph, incapable of catching the glint of the soul that gives us all true expression.
Thank you for rapping on my chamber door,
-Seranish_Shores
@Seranish_Shores - Very good … that would be a GREAT ending! Thanks for your comments and suggestions.