January 11, 2010
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Beckon Their Call
Amputees from their limb
They lie curled
Brown
Gold and others
Death with black
Pungent as they lie
They rot away
Brown
Gold and others
Death with black
Earth from whence they lived
They return and rot away
Brown
Gold and others
Death with black
Leaves from Fall
Beckon their call
Comments (10)
Lovely and seasonal.
Dear Steve,
Thanks for visiting my blog recently and leaving comments. (I think you’ve left two current ones, but I’m returning comments for my Jan 6th entry right now.)
This is a great poem, and it deseves one of my “answer poems”. My very first poem, written when I was 14, is called “A Chlorophyll Filled Death”.
I love the first line especially, which I read twice, before reading the rest of the poem, wondering if it made sense. After reading a couple more lines, it not only made sense, it’s the best line in the poem!
Michael F. Nyiri, poet, philosopher, fool
“A Chlorophyll Filled Death”
Poetry by Michael F. Nyiri
1967 (14 years old)
I am a leaf, blowing in the wind,
I am a sturdy, yet failing leaf.
I am alive,
But why ——— I live because of
The chlorophyll
Wrapped in my digestive tract –
Of a leaf!
I will live and keep on living,
Until I die.
When?
A question — How long is a leaf’s life –
LONG?
or SHORT?
Death is slowly creeping upon me,
Yet I feel no death.
DIE ———————————–
Yet I feel the wind will bring my fate.
A fate, but an adventure.
Here I feel I will be gone before the morn.
WHEN.
It is here. A wind. A breeze.
————-I am dead—————-
@baldmike2004 - Thank you Mike for sharing your poem with me and also your comments to my poem. Both of these poems speak of leaves … that is interesting. Thanks again and wishing you the best in 2010.
@stevieheart - Nice write Stevie. Judi
@jassmine - Thanks Judi for stopping in to read and for your reply. Take care and hope your weekend is filled with many blessings.
Stopped by and as I re-read this I think of Haiti. Change a few colors and…. well you get the idea, it threw me for a moment.
@vexations - The people of Haiti are sure going through a lot. Thanks for stopping in and your comment.
Powerful.
When you going to write some more Stevie. I love your verse. Judi
@jassmine - soon I am working on a poem on poem about money and problems