October 3, 2008
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Canvas of Dreams
The canvas of emotions can no longer hold the paint
Compassion drips without constraint
This night will paint the dreams
Weaving together two hearts by the seams
Two living souls asleep under star light’s affair
Star Dust painting dreams to ensnare
Hunter Fan twirls their emotions
Casting their dreams upon life’s oceans
Pomegranate Yankee burns its golden glow
Encasing their dreams in gold
Sleep they must as dreams are told
God paints the canvas to behold ©2008
Comments (18)
Wow I am totaly enchanted by your words.
I can see the painting as if it were right here in front of me.
Oh spin some more tales for I can get lost right here.
Hugs Gypsy
This night will paint the dreams
Weaving together two hearts by the seams
Two living souls asleep under star light’s affair
Star Dust painting dreams to ensnare
Oh how Enchanting………………….
Hugs Gypsy
@Gypsywings2fly - Thank you for your comment. So glad you enjoyed this poem.
Awesome Stevie just plain awesome! The best poem Ive read of yours to date…
@Adamission12 - Thank you Adam … this one was very fun to write. My wife had recently purchased a Yankee candle called Pomegranate so I decided to include this in this dream. Thanks for your recommendation and your more than kind remarks. Have a GREAT weekend Adam!
@stevieheart - You too bro and keep it up! Ive seen some really good improvement in your writing just in the short time that Ive known you on here…
@Adamission12 - I am always trying to improve … so please don’t hesitate to give constructive criticism as well. You have helped me before on a couple of my poems and I appreciate that very much. Sometimes I can’t see the forest for the trees and another set of eyes can always improve what is being seen. Thanks again!
I think this is one of my favorite poems by you.
I like it a lot. you’re such a great writer. keep it up.
@InternalxEmotions - Thank you for your comment … and I pen usually flows ink on paper every day! Have GREAT weekend.
Wow, I love this poem! Whenever I read it, it’s like getting lost in a world completely different than our own.
Oh what great words, write on dear writer. Yes I think those ocean pictures some are the Southern side of Australia. I am dreaming ocean today. Judi
@NavalFluff - Thank you so much for your kind comments to my poetry.
@jassmine - Well I sure thought so about the pictures being from Southern Australia. They sure brought back a flood of memories. Thank you for your lovely comment.
This is lovely. Well done!
Thanks so much for your comment on my poem. Hope you have GREAT weekend.
@jacksoncroons - Thanks so much for your comment on my poem. Hope you have GREAT weekend.
This is such beautiful imagery.. I loved it. Very well done
Thank you for your comment. I have enjoyed reading your poetry as well.