October 2, 2008
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Forgiveness
Nocturnal night quiet and bleak
Can’t help but wish that you were here to speak
I miss kissing your skin upon your cheek
Laying here afraid to even peek
The room seems empty and lonely
The cosmos knew that you were my only
An owl from elm tree yonder
Screeches its call and makes my mind wander
Silence seems deafening at times like this
Sickness strikes my body for a single kiss
If you read of my pain
And would like mend our broken chain
I will be the one to listen once more
I will be the one to open my heart’s door
I will be the one that will kneel upon the floor
I will be one to ask for forgiveness once more
If the pain is too much to bare
I will set sail upon tears that we have shared
My boat will make its way with each stroke of oar
You will find me alone on some distant shore ©2008
Comments (14)
It makes me sad. May you find the happiness you desire.
I am glad you liked Queen Mina.
Hugs & I promised I would not Bite
^^Mina^^
this was sad…but kind of hopeful too.
<3
@Queen_Mina - Actually I am very happy at the moment … this occurred many years ago … some things are never forgotten. So glad you don’t bite and thanks for your comment and visit today!
@Alyxandri - I am doing very well these days … forgiveness really works! Thanks for your comment.
“Silence seems deafening at times like this
Sickness strikes my body for a single kiss”
These lines raised from the page to greet my eyes…
@Adamission12 - Thank you Adam. Silence can be deafening!
Aw, thanks for the compliment. By the way, I’m especially fond of that last stanza of yours.
@Sphinx_Master - Thank you for you comment. Hope you have a great evening!
that last stanza, wow.
just incredible.
I can relate in so many ways. I really like this.
It’s amazing, it sounds really sentimental. It brings up memories.
@InternalxEmotions - Thanks so much for your lovely comment. I think most everyone has experienced these emotions at sometime in their life.
@NavalFluff - Thank you for your comments on my poem. So glad that you could connect with my writing.
So sad.. Filled with longing… peace always
@peacenow - Peace to you as well. Thanks for your comment.