September 29, 2008

  • A Lie

    A lie creeps and crawls into a soul
    Like termites it consumes away without control
    Empty destruction with sinful seduction
    The breath of a lie
    Is a breath of death to a friendship goodbye ©2008

Comments (8)

  • Among other things that those terrible things can do… Wonderful thoughts and just a little too true…

  • Lies are harmful, yes.  And sometimes we can never forget the pain they’ve caused.  But we also have the power to forgive.  And that is something that we should all try to do a little more often.  Something such as a lie only has the power to destroy if YOU give it that power.

    -Dark Prince

  • @Master_of_the_Dark_Hadou - So very true … forgiveness has a power all of its own. Thanks for  your comment.

  • @Adamission12 - Lies can be a very painful … but I guess it is part of being human. Take care Adam!

  • great piece, great metaphor and innuendo…in its brevity, this spoke volumes!!!

    well done!

    hugs,
    sage

  • Thank you Sage for your “Thumbs Up” and your kind words. Hope your pen flows with ink this coming week. 

  • I wonder if it is possible for humans not to lie. sometimes it just seems so natural.

    but lying is almost always a bad thing in a friendship. thanks for the poem & its message.

    <3

  • @Alyxandri - I think sometimes people lie to protect themselves and other times they lie to protect a friend from hurt. I am sure that there not one person that can say they have never lied. (Except Jesus) I know I have in the past … and I have learned that honesty is the best! I thank you for your comment.

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