September 26, 2008
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Destruction
Runaway wind
Invisible mask of destruction
From where did you come
Why so unconfined
Wayward wind
Onward to obstruction
Look at what you become
Why so unkind
Your words slice the soul
Without self-control ©2008
Runaway wind
Invisible mask of destruction
From where did you come
Why so unconfined
Wayward wind
Onward to obstruction
Look at what you become
Why so unkind
Your words slice the soul
Without self-control ©2008
Comments (7)
I just read this one several times and I must say that I really enyoyed it, there is definitely something about this one that really captures my thoughts well done…
this flows nicely. good personification too. the tone is almost admonishing.
I like.
<3
Wonderful words. I appreciate your writing. Judi
@Adamission12 - Thank you Adam for your comment … I actually found this one to not be one of my favorite, but I have found all to often that what I have found a writing that I felt left something out or wrong … and others find that it speaks to them in some special way.
@Alyxandri - TY for your comment on my poem.
@jassmine - Thank you Judi for your comment on my poetry.
I like your poetry. Come visit me when you can. Judi