September 24, 2008
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The Massage
Did you know that last night the night before
I came knocking on your door
It was I who dared to come within
Only to impart what was needed to begin
I had to share this special event
Before this frosty night was spent
The crisp snow bequeaths light of the moon’s glow
And icicles were dripping so
As I entered unknown to thee
The air was saturated with Burberry Brit cologne from me
There man and woman lay in slumber sleep
As if the lord was so to keep
Sleep you must and I dare not wake
Dreams were surely in the make
I pulled down white linen covers
Splendor of beauty I discovered
I went gently to work and massaged special lotions
Working fast with great devotion
The air now full of perfume
As I walked around the room
The night was old
Covers without they would get cold
I pulled up white linen covers
Man and woman were lovers
I awoke the next day
My head in disarray
The visit was real as far as I can perceive
But dreams that night seemed hard to believe
I lay in my bed there in the air was the smell of that special lotion
My mind worked and gave rise to this notion
That it was truly I that visited last night the night before
I came knocking on your door
If you wake from morning slumber
Burberry Brit cologne is fully encumbered
Please then forgive my intrusion
As none of this was an illusion. ©2008
Comments (8)
Ooo….this is interesting.
@casmarie - Thank you for your comment. Hope you have a GREAT week filled with many smiles.
OOOHHH I LOVE RANDY NEWMAN!!! Very nice write as well this is not the first time that youve done one about a possible dream I like the idea…
@Adamission12 - I love Randy Newman as well and thank you for your comment Adam. Have a GREAT day!
I enjoyed this (cringed a tiny bit at your “encumbered” cologne) but it was very lyrical and mesmeric. I’ve dreamed of “out of body” experiences before but sadly, lacked any corroborations.
@paison_de_moot - I agree … maybe a different word than encumbered would be better … but at the moment cant think of the word that might work. Thanks again for your suggestion and your comment. Hope you have a great week ahead of you!
Well Done !
Here is a friend that likes to put his heart into poems .I hope you will enjoy them and him .
http://www.xanga.com/gideonrecon
http://teamtruth.com/poetry/poetry.htm
http://teamtruth.com/poetry/po_jl1.htm
Barry
@Barrygw - Thank you Barry for your comment and also for the links. Hope you have a GREAT week filled with many smiles.