August 27, 2008
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The Candle’s All
The candle wax that dripped that night … gave its all to surround the love that was shared tonight. The crystal vase that held the sand comforts the wax that once could stand. The candle stood before the winds of time … to witness the love of two that seemed divine. The flame that shared its life this night … wrapped its glow around two bodies in the golden glow of its light. The light has passed as time must end … the love of two was godsend. They lay alone aside the wax that once stood tall … dreaming the dreams that trailed by the gossamer smoke left by the candle’s all. © 2008
Comments (2)
A good focus on the candle as it melt throughout the passion of the night this is beautiful… I have one little quirky complaint on this one “The music that played by bedside vase …” by and beside are the same here it just didnt make sense ya know Im not tryin to be mean just pointing it out… Thanks for your kind words again friend and I must say that Im enjoying your work as well…
@Adamission12 - Thanks for your comments … I appreciate your thoughts on all my writings. It is good see my poetry though the eyes of others. Again wishing you the best.